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Thursday, 6 September 2018

The magic animal toys with boy

The magic animal toys with boy


The toys attacked golend lod puppy nut the puppy was so
friendly and wanted peace. But the animal toys shouted ‘ we just
want go out!’ Finally the puppy understood their wood and helped them
get out, puppy hard pushed louge window. The puppy pushed, pushed,
pushed finally the window brok and the animals got out.

6 comments:

  1. hey bro I like the way you put words puppy because is cutie and is it my favourite annimal

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  2. Harry I like the way you had the golden lab puppy help the toys to escape:)

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  3. hi harry nice job. i like the way how you put Finally instead of nothing. may be next time you can make the story more long and interesting.this makes a picture my head.i will see you next time bye bro

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  4. Hi Harry. I really like the way you talked about the puppy and how it understood Golend's toys. Next time can you fix the spelling that was wrong like nut to but and probably put a name on the puppy. This reminds me watching toys story when I was five.

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  5. Hi Harry. I really like the way you talked about the puppy and how it understood Golend's toys. Next time can you fix the spelling that was wrong like nut to but and probably put a name on the puppy. This reminds me watching toys story when I was five.

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  6. hi Harry I like the way you put that the toys wanted to be friendly and have peace. on the story Maybe next time you could fix your spelling. This is same as the book that I read.

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