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Thursday, 18 October 2018

Treasure form the sea

Tricky vocabulary

Noisily mean very noisy.
Every day my brother was so noisily
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Ahead mean frist going, frist one.
When I go to swiming pool my dad always ahead.
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Unusual mean Different from usual.
One day I found a unusual treasure.  Past tense I found
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Window sill mean a sill in front of the window.
My nan always put flower pot on the window sill.
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Megan’s nan lived by the sea.
Megan loved to stay with Nan in the summer holidays.

Who is speaking
said Megan
Said Nan
I don’t want the fish to die!’
Shoo, shoo, seagull!’
‘What can we do to save it, Nan!’
‘Nan! I found a fish
‘But the water will take ages to come up to here.’
‘But why it is here not by the sea.’
‘Tell me a story about this,’
‘Then we can keep it safe until it can swim away.’
‘Maybe we should have our iconic here,’
‘Dot worrg.there will be other holiday.’
Check this spelling again Harry.

Going well Harry. You are such a good worker:)
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Interesting
Megan loved to stay with Nan in the summer holidays.
Her parents ere coming to collect her on Sunday night.
Megan’s nan lived by the sea.
On this holiday, Megan hoped that she would ind something amazing left behind by the sea.
By the end of the week, Megan had found a broken toy, half a shoe, a dead crag, and some seaweed that popped when she squeezed it.
Sometimes she found treasure left by the tide.

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One day my mum find a seaweed an something form the tide,then We are sitting in the sunlight and I ask ‘Nan! Tell me a story about this.’because my mum was a good storyteller.

BY: Harry











1 comment:

  1. Hi Harry I like the way you explain your meaning properly and I like the way you put speech mark at your sentence. but maybe be next time you could fix the spelling this is the same work that i did.

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