Treasure form the sea
Tricky vocabulary
Noisily mean very noisy.
Every day my brother was so noisily
Ahead mean frist going, frist one.
When I go to swiming pool my dad always ahead.
Unusual mean Different from usual.
One day I found a unusual treasure. Past tense I found
Window sill mean a sill in front of the window.
My nan always put flower pot on the window sill.
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Megan’s nan lived by the sea.
Megan loved to stay with Nan in the summer holidays.
Who is speaking
said Megan
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Said Nan
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I don’t want the fish to die!’
Shoo, shoo, seagull!’
‘What can we do to save it, Nan!’
‘Nan! I found a fish
‘But the water will take ages to come up to here.’
‘But why it is here not by the sea.’
‘Tell me a story about this,’
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‘Then we can keep it safe until it can swim away.’
‘Maybe we should have our iconic here,’
‘Dot worrg.there will be other holiday.’
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Check this spelling again Harry.
Going well Harry. You are such a good worker:)
AnA
:)
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:(
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Interesting
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Megan loved to stay with Nan in the summer holidays.
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Her parents ere coming to collect her on Sunday night.
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Megan’s nan lived by the sea.
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On this holiday, Megan hoped that she would ind something amazing left behind by the sea.
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By the end of the week, Megan had found a broken toy, half a shoe, a dead crag, and some seaweed that popped when she squeezed it.
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Sometimes she found treasure left by the tide.
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CS
One day my mum find a seaweed an something form the tide,then We are sitting in the sunlight and I ask ‘Nan! Tell me a story about this.’because my mum was a good storyteller.
BY: Harry
Hi Harry I like the way you explain your meaning properly and I like the way you put speech mark at your sentence. but maybe be next time you could fix the spelling this is the same work that i did.
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