Why you should go to A&P show
On Thursday I with teacher and toroa went to the A&P
show. We saw lots of animals. My
favourite was the farm horse because they
are fast, kind, handsome, friendly and helpful.
When you touth the horse you can feel the horse was so
king, and I discovered that every horse has an individual
smell, but they all smell good. To me the odour of a horse is
like a perfume.And it sound like a man sing a song. And I saw
they ate dry grass, and they are drink
the water and the water was so clear like a mirror.
show. We saw lots of animals. My
favourite was the farm horse because they
are fast, kind, handsome, friendly and helpful.
When you touth the horse you can feel the horse was so
king, and I discovered that every horse has an individual
smell, but they all smell good. To me the odour of a horse is
like a perfume.And it sound like a man sing a song. And I saw
they ate dry grass, and they are drink
the water and the water was so clear like a mirror.
So I think you could go to A&P show.
BY : Harry
BY : Harry
hi Harry it me Tevita I like the way you your fullstop on and comer mabey next time you could put more ly words on
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ReplyDeleteIts Jaren. I liked the way you told us everything you know in the A&P Show. Next time you should type a lot of adjectives because they are really important. This reminds me back at the time I visit to my friend's farm.
Hi harry itś me Tutoe i really like your work because you used lots of detail and lots of sentenses and i liked the way you used that word discovered from Tutoe
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