Beat and beyond

Hi guys
On Tuesday we have started writing a song about anything we want, at the start I have no idea what I going to write about, and then a few minutes later, finally I have an idea, and the idea was, ( THE WORLD ) 

here is my song 

( THE WORLD )

Oh! The world, the world, 

you were so beautiful,

 we love you, the world. 

Thanks, world, thanks world,

 thanks for giving us the water, the food, 

and the Clothe,s pants, 

thanks give yus place to build our houses.

The world, the world, 

you make the mountains for us to climb, 

give us places to play, 

I love you the world.

When the world was raining, 

that means the world was crying, 

when the wind was strong,

 that means the world blew the wind so hard.

The world, some times you push people together, 

some times you took people’s life away, 

the world, you separate two people,

 the world, the world.

The reason why I chose to write a song about the world.

The reason was that ''the world'', this idea was the first idea in my mind. And the other big reason was that, when you get old, sometimes you want to see or talk to some people that you really care, and you can't see them, but the world may let you meet with your friend in another place, like some times when you turn your heart back and then you may see your friend, and some times you can't see them forever, and in China they saying that ''the world was so small'' like if you have a friend that is living far away from you, and you all ways want to them, then maybe one time you may see them just when you turn your heart over then you may see your friend. 

The meaning of the metaphor

When the world was raining, that means the world was crying, when the wind was strong, that means the world blew the wind so hard.

The meaning was that the world also has the mood

I feel write a song was so hard because we need thinking about the metaphor and the title were so hard to do.