inspired writing.

Hi guys, today we have write inspired writing, and we can choose a lot of images to write about, and I have chosen an image that is about a snack, and here is my writing.

Harry

There was a snack on the tree There was a big snack on the tree  There was a big snack laying on the tree, as fast as the lion catch the animals, the snack has caught his prey. There was a big horrible, dangerous snake lying on the old, big tree, as fast as a cheetah catch the animals, the snake has caught his prey. There was a big horrible, dangerous snake lying on the old, big tree, and excited about catching his first prey. There was a dark black dangerous, Rattlesnake as big as an elephant, he lay on the old, big tree, and excited about catches his first prey, as fast as a cheetah catch the animals, the snack has caught his prey.

at first we write a simple sentence, and we just add up the word and some describe word. And right now I need to write about my VOCAB, and U give my self an R5 because I didn't do so well and I did not write that much information and describe words.