Hi guys
On Monday, I have complete my writing work.
here is my writing
Athens
One boy called George with his pet Kelesi ( the eagle ), arrived the city of Athens, he jumps off the boat, the first thing he saw was the magnificent mountain protects Athens, as the parents look after the child, the blue ocean as clear as the mirror, on top of the clear water the powerful, huge, wooden ship across the ocean. He saw a lot of small shop around the port, one of them is the smelly fish shop, they cut the tuna in half, and put on top of the ice, for others to buy, the next he saw was the old man painting his colorful earthen jar, and there are hips of different sizes and colors of the earthen jar.
The reason why George come to Athens was that first, he is coming for his brother, and secondly, he comes to have a rest, and stay at Athens for some mouths.
Then he saw a warrior threw a tomato at the leader, and the next week his all troop members have been killed, just because one of the warriors throws a potato to the leader, and sadly one of the members is George’s brother and he started his avenge.
Two weeks later, he found out which person, has killed his brother, and then he also found out what leader tells the person to kill them, and he killed the leader, but the leader that he killed is the son of the Athens leader, and he started to survive, first he found his boat, and he put the mask on, then went to the shop to buy some food, so he has enough for him to eat and drink, but he still needs to watch out for the troops, so they don’t catch him.
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